tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647188858325056022.post8811549122591518257..comments2023-10-31T11:53:56.276-04:00Comments on The 828: I need your opinion!Paige Woinerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07204238243107594354noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647188858325056022.post-4889639676682601552011-05-06T10:49:35.498-04:002011-05-06T10:49:35.498-04:00I'm with Evie on this one xDI'm with Evie on this one xDAnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02013146418224892533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647188858325056022.post-13496106818001342662011-05-03T15:32:51.836-04:002011-05-03T15:32:51.836-04:00Thanks guys for your help!
@Evie- Thank you so m...Thanks guys for your help! <br /><br />@Evie- Thank you so much!! I'm going to use that pitch! That helped a ton! <br />And thanks for the point explaination.. I actually didn't know it worked like that..hahaPaige Woinerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07204238243107594354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647188858325056022.post-24888674366346743192011-05-03T10:11:20.842-04:002011-05-03T10:11:20.842-04:00I like the second one better, but I also agree wit...I like the second one better, but I also agree with Evie. A combination of the two would work very well!Munchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17545554572721290371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647188858325056022.post-52947962353260266602011-05-03T09:40:26.664-04:002011-05-03T09:40:26.664-04:00First, don't forget how InkPop works. ;) You o...First, don't forget how InkPop works. ;) You only need to pick something for 24 hours. After that, it doesn't affect the book's rating in any way, so if you had 20 picks, and now you have 10, you still have all the points from the 20 picks. <br />Example (made up point values for the example):<br />1 pick=10 points<br />5 picks=50 points<br />10 picks=100 points<br />8=100 points<br />3 picks=100 points<br />4 picks=110 points<br />You never lose points, and the length of time your project is on someone's picks only helps them with their personal trendsetter rank. The only time you'll get a pink arrow is if someone else passes you in the charts. So don't fret. ;)<br /><br />Okay, so onto the pitches. Actually, I think you'd have a stronger one if you edited the two together. Try something like this:<br /><br />Popularity has a price, it just depends on how far you'll go to pay it.<br /><br />"Now that I know the ugly truth hidden behind their eyes, I'm hopelessly lost."<br /><br />Popular dancer Dakota Wright thought she had everything. Amazing friends, a great boyfriend, the latest fashions, and incredible talent. But a switch from dull Rexford High to the San Diego School of Performing Arts puts it all on the line. Friendships are broken, relationships are shattered, and Dakota realizes her baseball star boyfriend and fabulous Rexford friends aren't as trustful as she believed. <br /><br />Once Dakota thinks she’s fought her way back to Queen-Be at her new school, dirty secrets are uncovered that alter her life forever. Popularity becomes the least of her worries because no matter how much she wants to be perfect, she'll always be flawed.<br /><br />Hope this helps, m'dear! :)Evie Jayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00196982399488470921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647188858325056022.post-54301393632653057002011-05-03T02:06:07.401-04:002011-05-03T02:06:07.401-04:00I agree with Qui, the second one would be better. ...I agree with Qui, the second one would be better. I read it, and you have more comments than any of my stories have combined together, so don't give up all hope :)Conversehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04971018504778767949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647188858325056022.post-38086353916125775382011-05-02T23:05:01.522-04:002011-05-02T23:05:01.522-04:00I dunno...I don't really *like* either of them...I dunno...I don't really *like* either of them. They seem too general and tell-ey. If I pick up a book and it just <b>tells</b> me what happens on the inside jacket, I normally put it back down. <br />But, If I had to pick, I'd pick the second one.Savannah Jeanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02659062736697798048noreply@blogger.com