Wednesday, December 22, 2010

Pitch for my new book.. still a work in progress.

Here is the pitch for my new book that is currently untitled. I might change some parts as the story goes on, but here it is so far-

"Life, it's a funny little thing, isn't it? Until now, mine was a breeze. Now it's been thrown at me like a wrecking ball."

"People, you never truly know if you can trust them or not. Sometimes you trust too many people, and they don't deserve it at all. I've been lied to my entire life, and I'm just finding this out now. Turns out the people I thought I could truly trust, shattered that relationship like a broken vase. I'm stuck in the middle now, not sure where to turn, going insane. It all happened a long time ago when I was too young to stop it. People tried to find me and bring me back safe and sound. But for all they knew, I'd been wiped off the face of the earth.

Now that I've been found and I know the ugly truth hidden behind their eyes, I'm hopelessly lost."

That's it so far! It will probably change as I said before. But, Please leave me your thoughts and suggestions, and tell me if you'd read this book based on the pitch!



Amaranthine said...

Yeah. So, what's the story about?

Savannah said...

Lol, I'm wondering the same thing as Amaranthine.
It sounds good, but I still don't know what its about. :)

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*Brookie* said...

The story sounds great.... i would sooo pick it up! I gave you an award on my blog! check it out(:

*Brookie* said...

The Clique is AWESOME! There's 13 books....and the 14th (and last) book comes out in February. I love the series because the characters are so real and relatable. It's about a privileged clique who goes to a private school in upstate New York. They have one leader.... Who call herself the 'alpha' and her name is Massie. She is one of the main characters. The other main character is named Claire (a girl who tries to get in the clique and finally does) I know it seems like it has no substance, but trust me, it does. The story has many life lessons and tells the struggles and insecurities of the girls in the clique. It's a great story and has a wonderful about the author. Here's a couple websites: (the author)

Hope this helped!